It has come to our attention that some authors struggle to kill off characters in whom they have invested, even when it would further the plot and aid in character growth. In order to avoid this shortcoming, we present this study in killing characters. To prevent lack of investment in a given character, everything possible has been randomized. The eight principal characters represent the stereotypical members of a fantasy group, with roles randomly assigned to equal numbers of either sex. The perspective order (excluding that of Marya, whose perspective begins each section) is also fully randomized, as is the order of character deaths and the specific perspective in which each consecutive death occurs.
Marya hesitated, her hand poised over the switch that would turn on her Device. She had no choice, she knew, since this was both her job and her punishment, but still, unreasonably, her hand did not descend. It’s easy right now, she told herself. Easy. With a quick motion she pushed the switch and sat back, breathing hard. The Device gave a low groan and shivered to life. The grainy screen flickered and slowly zoomed in on a large blue banner, carefully embroidered with the king’s decree. He’s mad, Marya thought, then quickly pushed the thought away. It had been similar words to those that had gotten her thrown in jail in the first place. It was nothing to her if the king wanted to prove his ultimate power over everyone in the country, nothing to her if he wanted to use teens to feed his insanity, getting them to solve unsolvable puzzles, escape unescapable traps, find things that didn’t exist. Except it did matter. It mattered very much. But there was nothing she could do that would stop the orders from coming.
On screen, crowds of teens were arriving, their necks craned to look up at the blue banner. Marya watched as their numbers swelled. It was easy to believe that this was all the teens in the country between 14 and 16, as the king had commanded. Of course, some had probably stayed quietly at home, hoping their absence would not be noticed, but most would not dare to disobey. Marya’s hands trembled, and she pulled them away from the panel of buttons. Through the Device, she saw a tall, heavyset man step up onto the platform. It was Malcav, one of the king’s trusted advisors. He was the man who had led her to this station, and the one who would bring her orders. She hated him.
He had a long list in one hand, and teen after teen stepped up beside him, filling groups.
Her Device jerked, and she stiffened, but it only zoomed in, the audio crackling to life. This was her group, then.
Malcav’s voice sounded thin and strange through the Device, but Marya heard the names plainly, each cementing itself painfully into her mind.
“Annersap. Okner, Annersap.”
A tall boy, auburn hair cropped close to his head, mounted the stage.
“Arundasi. Joran, Arundasi.”
A short, round boy, skewed by the Device.
“Aztlán. Friya, Aztlán.”
A girl now, tall and blonde. Marya wanted to stop watching, but she didn’t dare. She’d have to be able to recognize these teens.
“Noy. Solldero, Noy.”
Another boy, dark haired and skinned. Neither tall nor short, she thought, though the Device made it hard to tell.
“Questel. Zinnia, Questel.”
A pang shot to Marya’s heart. Zinnia was her own sister’s name. But the girl was nothing like Marya’s sister; she had tanned skin and a curtain of long, black hair.
“Stern. Leera, Stern.”
A lovely girl made her way up to the platform. When she turned to face the rest, Marya’s gaze fell on the thick braid of black hair lying precisely over her shoulder.
Suddenly, Marya reached to turn off the Device, catching herself just in time.
Watch, she told herself. That’s all you have to do for now.
“Tonarych. Elle, Tonarych.”
There was a moment of confusion in the crowd as two teens started to ascend the platform. When the full name was called, the boy sank back into the crowd and a short, brown-haired girl continued to stand next to the others.
“Vojen. Cay, Vojen.”
A wide boy with a thatch of light brown hair ran up the steps to the platform, tripped on the top one, and fell flat. The brown-haired girl helped him up, and Malcav waited for the murmur of laughter to die away before announcing,
“Annersap, Aztlán, Noy, Questel, Stern, Tonarych, Vojen. You are Group Marya.”
Marya flinched violently. Malcav seemed to be staring directly at her as he named the oblivious group after her. She barely heard Malcav directing her group to their quarters to await instructions. The audio turned off, then, and shortly after, the screen went blank. The day’s work was over. Marya stared at the screen for several moments, seeing again each of the eight teens just named.
With a vicious jab of her thumb, she turned off the Device, covered her face with her hands, and cried.
Cay Vojen watched admiringly as the tall boy in front of him ducked slightly to go through the doorframe. It was unnecessary, true, but it lent an air of power to the boy. Cay himself made it into the house with only a bruised elbow, something of an accomplishment for him. Taking a deep breath, he enjoyed the musty, polished smell, so different from the sweaty stench outside or the earthy scent of his uncle’s farm. He stepped aside to allow the other teens to enter, rubbing his shin where he’d scraped it falling on the platform. One of the girls brushed a strand of long, straight hair out of her face.
“Are you okay?”
It took Cay a moment to realize she was talking to him.
“Oh, yeah. No. Uh, I sort of scraped my leg. But I’m fine. Unless you want to look at it. I mean. . .”
As usual, he’d said too much, too loudly. Embarrassed, the others looked away, and Cay bit his tongue. He should’ve done it sooner.
“My mother’s a doctor. I can help you, if you want.” The girl was still standing there.
“Sure. Please. Thanks.” Cay bit his tongue again, harder, and took a deep breath.
“I’m Cay.”
“Zinn,” the girl responded, opening her backpack and pulling out a large kit.
“Could you roll up your pant leg?”
Cay sat down in the entryway, ducking as another boy leaned past him to shut the door.
The scrape wasn’t too bad, but it was bleeding more than he’d realized.
Zinn worked quickly and efficiently, her tanned hands jumping from kit to scrape with practiced ease. When she sat back, Cay caught a whiff of flowers and sniffed appreciatively.
“Wow, thanks. That was really fast. And I like your smell.”
Her eyebrows lifted, and he hastened to correct himself.
“I mean, your perfume, or whatever’s on your hair. Or-”
She drew back, staring at him, and walked away.
Cay sighed. He’d have to figure out how to apologize, sometime soon. After all, they would be working together for the next week.
Joran Arundasi started to stand on tiptoe to see over the shoulders of the taller boys in front of him, but thought better of it. If he lost his balance and fell into one of them . . . he shuddered to think of it. One of the boys in front of him turned around, revealing a narrow face with a tiny, scraggly, auburn mustache.
“Quite frankly,” he was saying, “I do not much care for this particular invention of Joseph Antugne’s. Within the wide range of his ideas, the most useful was the idea of rolling stairs. Of course, rolling stairs were later perfected by the Ottern brothers, but Antugne…”
“Nice mustache,” Joran told him, grinning. “Without it, I might have thought you were a fish, but now I see you’re a catfish.”
The other boy, dark-skinned with tight curls, turned sharply.
“Enough. You’re Arundasi, are you?”
Crushed, Jor nodded.
“Know anything about locks?”
Joran flinched at the mention of anything mechanical, but he nodded again.
The boy stepped back and gestured to the door.
Joran bent over the doorknob. It was a modern lock, the kind his father had recently begun to use for his storehouses.
“What did the spy say to the ninja?” he began, a grin spreading over his face.
The boy coughed impatiently.
“It’s a detector lock,” Jor mumbled, the grin vanishing. “The key should be in a little box somewhere . . .”
He located it on the wall, uncomfortably conscious of his damp hair, wrinkled shirt, and scuffed shoes. He would have to reach up to get it. If only he weren’t so short. . .
“Did you guys hear about the giraffe who was too silly to wear a scarf in the winter? He was a real redneck.”
One of the girls laughed, more to be kind than because the joke had been funny.
“The giraffe – an interesting choice of subject for a joke.”
The mustache boy was leaning against the wall, looking meditatively up at the ceiling. “Although it once lived on all three continents, excessive hunting has caused a decline in the species-”
The curly-haired boy was examining the box.
“And this?” he said quietly to Joran.
Joran reluctantly looked at it.
“There’s a five-digit code.”
He hoped the boy wouldn’t expect him to remember it. He knew that someone had told the group the code, but he couldn’t remember even one number.
The mustache boy was still talking.
“. . . speaking of which, scientists’ attention has been turned to an unnatural surge of aggression between giraffes and elephants in the past year. Theories include-”
Jor opened his mouth to make another joke, but one of the girls, half hiding behind sweeping black hair, slipped past him and tapped in the code. The box fell open, and the curly-haired boy caught the key as it fell out.
“Nice,” was all he said, but Joran felt a pang of envy; he wished he had done something more than identify the lock. It occurred to him that with that simple word, the curly-haired boy had assumed the role of leader, taking on all responsibilities. It was a very human role, Joran thought, but he wouldn’t oppose him.
The boy unlocked all four doors. Joran peeked inside one, wondering if they’d get to choose their beds, but each cot had a placard on it with one of their names. Jor twisted his face into a smile, but they hadn’t been allowed to choose the other members in their group, nor select their living quarters. Assigning them their beds dehumanized them further.
Zinnia Questel followed the others from room to room, but she wasn’t looking at the furnishings or finding her bed. She was noticing little red-brown stains around the seams of the walls. They were like tiny flowers pricking through snow.
Her eye fell on a placard on one of the beds. She picked it up to look closer at it.
The edges were uneven, jagged as though they had been individually cut out. There was a small blister on the back of this one; a single drop of water had landed on it.
Someone touched her shoulder. Jerking violently away, Zinn spun against the wall, feeling individually the invisible bumps and hollows.
One of the other girls was standing there, a careful expression of surprise on her face. She was pretty, with black hair in a thick braid. Zinnia focused on that, her fingers subtly tracing the smooth curves of it as the strands ducked and curled around one another.
“That’s me,” the girl said.
Zinn looked up.
The girl gestured to the placard.
“I’m Leera Stern.”
Her nose was small and sharp, a few freckles sprinkled across it. Two shorter hairs had escaped from the braid and drifted across her forehead.
Zinn forced her mind away from details. Leera had just said something, Zinnia didn’t know what.
Fortunately, the taller girl didn’t seem to mind.
“You’re in the room across the hall, I believe.” She paused, watching Zinn.
“You have a good mind for details. If you see something out of the ordinary, tell me, all right?”
Zinn nodded.
Solldero Noy stood facing the front door. The pose discouraged anyone from coming up to him, but he was fully aware of their movements. At the moment, the seven other teens in Solldero’s group were accustoming themselves to their new living quarters. Solldero had slept in new beds before; his mind was on other matters. He was already considering the positions he would put the others in if they got into a dangerous situation. He’d have to drill them on their places – Solldero knew that crowds could turn into mobs in the blink of an eye, especially if they were half-drunk. He’d seen it happen before at various taverns on the Oceanfront. Maybe Annersap on his right – he was tall enough. Solldero didn’t fully trust him, though. Vojen would have to go somewhere in the back. Not the left, since that was a pivot point. The right, then. The one problem with Arundasi was that he was short. Also, he spilled jokes like a tired barmaid.
He wasn’t sure about the girls, except Questel. She was obviously the right choice for healer, so the center for her. Then there was the question of standing guard during the night. Solldero wasn’t sure the others would accept his authority if he ordered watches, and the only alternative was staying up himself. He yawned in spite of himself. It had been a long journey to get here, and he was worn out from staying on high alert for the past several hours. He didn’t trust that man, Malcav.
Footsteps dropped lightly behind him. One of the girls gave a polite cough.
“Yes?”
Solldero turned his head to look at her in his peripheral vision.
It was Leera Stern.
She nodded to him, clasping her hands behind her back, and moved up to stand at his side.
“I’d like to volunteer for guard duty tonight.”
Solldero took a moment before responding. He appreciated how she’d come straight to the point, no beating around the bush or unnecessary words. Her choice of words was intriguing, showing a mind that moved on a parallel track with his. She hadn’t asked if there was going to be guard duty, which would have devalued his leadership, or suggested that he appoint her to watch, which would have suggested that he wasn’t the leader here. Most importantly, she’d used the word ‘guard’, which implied that she, too, didn’t trust the king or his representatives.
“Fine. Take the first half, I’ll take the second.”
She flashed him a quick glance, and he noted with satisfaction that she understood his subtext. He was taking more responsibility in standing watch in the more dangerous time, and taking more leadership by being the one to be already alert when the others awoke. He was also tacitly admitting that he couldn’t be certain if the others had accepted him as leader, and that he didn’t fully trust them. Solldero held his breath, waiting to see what she would do.
She nodded crisply, waited a moment longer, then quietly withdrew.
Solldero faced the door again, analyzing the faint noises outside for danger. Yes, he decided, Stern would go on his left. It was his weaker side, but she could handle the pressure. Annersap would go on his right, where he could keep an eye on him. He’d tell the others in the morning.
Friya Aztlán turned back the covers on her bed with a shudder. Were most sheets like these? They were so . . . coarse. She’d noticed that the other teens, all working class, wore clothes of similar materials. The girl just coming into the room, Leera Stern, even used this dark, rough cloth to tie her braid. Friya couldn’t imagine tying her own hair with anything but the silk ribbons she was accustomed to. She opened her embroidered bag to take out a nightgown, wavering between dark blue and violet. Leera, Friya noticed, was wearing all dark colors. Some black, mostly dark greys and earthy browns. It made her look powerful, and Friya felt small next to her, although in reality she was a bit taller. Violet, Friya decided, was too fancy. With a jolt, she realized that she was the one out of place here, not the other teens or the rough materials and dark colors. She knew nothing of – well, anything they were going to do. However much she tried to fit in, she’d still be as flimsy as her nightgown in comparison with the others.
She admired the way the others were accepting statuses. Joran Arundasi, for example, seemed comfortable joking around all the time, even when he was repeatedly put down. Or Zinnia Questel. Zinn, she’d introduced herself to Cay. She was so ready to help the other teens. Friya didn’t know what help she’d be in solving riddles and finding oddities. She couldn’t even figure out what her place was in group Marya.
Frowning, Friya sat on the bed. It felt as lumpy and grey as it looked. Still, Friya was resolved not to complain. She wasn’t truly part of the group, but she certainly didn’t want them to look down on her. She looked over at Leera to see how she was coping.
Leera was looking back at her, waiting almost impatiently. For what? For Friya to go to sleep?
Friya tried to return the look, but Leera’s cool stare was quickly draining her confidence.
“What?” Friya managed weakly.
Leera looked away without answering.
Friya bit her lip and lay down. She was nervous, tired, and uncomfortable, and she was lonely. Well, she had been lonely before. This was an adventure. She might as well make the best of it.
Okner Annersap wondered vaguely why his roommate was watching him with glowing admiration, but his mind was working on remembering the author of that book he’d read on the history of bedsteads. The bedstead he was currently lying on was short and squat, with iron on the outside.
“It is probably hollow,” he went on. No point in wasting a good audience. “Beds were expensive and heavy around the time they came up with this style. The Count of Nort. suggested they make hollow bars. He also suggested that the beds be worked and assembled relay fashion, but the latter suggestion was adapted nearly a decade after his death.”
There was a knock on the door.
A boy – the tense, wiry one – put in his head.
“I’ll wake you tomorrow at first light. We want to get the jump on the other groups.”
“Ah,” Okner said. He had remembered the author of that book. He was the son of a more famous author, who had (unusually) written a sequel for a series by a third author, recently deceased.
The wiry boy was still speaking.
“I also want to do a few drills. Have you heard of Alar Solldero?”
Okner’s roommate shook his head silently, and Okner straightened with pleasure.
“He became famous when, after being captured by pirates, he-”
“After that.”
Okner was annoyed, but he mentally jumped thirty-odd years.
“When he received word of his wife’s death, he took up residence on a large residential harbor called Oceanfront, where he organized a small band into a group called ‘Solldero’s Arm’. It more than doubled in size within a year, due to local admiration and the pressing necessity of work under Governor Yilor. The group was known for keeping order and assisting in-”
The wiry boy broke in.
“He trained his men so well that at a flick of his finger they could be under cover before a knife could be thrown. Not one of his men died while under his command, except one who disobeyed his order to drop. Alar Solldero was loved and respected until the day of his death.”
“I was just coming to that,” Okner said, disgruntled.
The boy merely looked at him, the enthusiasm in his eyes and voice quickly fading to impassivity.
“At first light,” he repeated, and shut the door.
Okner considered getting up and slamming the door, like the erstwhile King’s Companion, just to make a point, but he decided against it. The King’s Companion had later been executed, as he recalled. . .
Leera Stern pulled her blanket closer around her shoulders, stifling a yawn. Soldiers didn’t fall asleep on duty; she’d learned that from when her brother Keern had done it in a week-long practice with her father as captain. He’d had to do chores all night the rest of the week.
Leera had been careful to do her best on every duty after that. Still, she rather hoped something exciting would happen during her watch tonight. It wasn’t that she was trying to gain favors with Noy – as far as she was concerned, he could use her as she was, or not at all – but it would be something to do. Her father had warned her that the king wouldn’t play fair, and sometimes the expectation of danger was worse than the danger itself. Also, boring.
She stood up and paced the hallway, ready to dive into the nearest doorway the instant an attack came. Nothing of consequence happened.
Leera pursed her lips as the time came near to switch shifts with Noy. She wouldn’t be surprised if the night were totally uneventful. How annoying.
Elle Tonarych stood in the dark hallway, blinking bemusedly. She would be happy to do whatever their leader – Solldero, she thought his name was – wanted, but they hadn’t had breakfast yet, and she was tired.
“No!” he was saying. “It’s got to be faster than that. See, if someone throws a knife, you can’t duck two seconds after I put up my hand. You’ve got to duck practically while I put up my hand.”
He looked around at their bleary faces, looking discouraged.
Elle felt sorry for him. None of them was doing very well, except the girl with all that hair coiled on one side of her head. Determination radiated from her.
“Well, let’s practice running,” Solldero said wearily.
“Why in the world should we go left when you point right?” the light-haired boy asked.
Solldero closed his eyes, and Elle closed her own in sympathy. He’d already explained this twice.
“’Cause left is right, and right is wrong!” cut in the shortest boy.
The light-haired boy looked confused.
“I believe it is intended to confuse the enemy,” the tallest boy explained thoughtfully. “Although I do not think we will encounter anyone who would fall under that category.”
“You never know-” Solldero began.
“That’s nonsense! The king would never tell us to do something dangerous. I don’t see why we should do this at all.”
It was the noble’s daughter talking. She had been the most awkward of them all at dropping and ducking, and now she looked hot and disagreeable, her blonde hair clumped into sweaty strands.
Solldero clenched his fists in exasperation.
“Look, I know we have different political views, but-”
The light-haired boy interrupted him, speaking to the noble’s daughter.
“My uncle says the king is crazy. He’s a blundering idiot, and spoiled and self-centered.”
Elle cringed. She could see the conversation deteriorating into an argument.
“The king? Crazy? That’s treas-”
The girl who’d been doing the best at the exercises leaped forward.
“All right, you two. Everyone, listen up! You were not invited to a political discussion, you were ordered to a drill. In a drill, you don’t talk without permission, you don’t walk without permission, you don’t do anything without permission.” She had been striding along their ragged row, hands clasped behind her back, staring them all in the eye. She jerked her chin at the tallest boy.
“And do you know where you get that permission?”
He looked offended.
“From Noy. If he tells you to drop, drop. If he tells you to run, run. Listen, people. If you don’t like the king, well, show him up by defeating every task. If you’re a loyal subject, fulfill the requirements he set out. But either way, you take orders from Noy. Got it?”
Elle sent her an appreciative smile and nodded. She’d adroitly averted the argument. The others made similar gestures of acknowledgement, and the girl marched back to her place in the line.
“Noy.” She nodded at their leader, who nodded back gratefully.
Elle took a deep breath and shook away thoughts of breakfast and her brother, living in a different group, and focused on preparing for the tasks the king would set them.
One week. Then it would be over, and they would all return home.